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只是陈述过于累赘 第一人称用的太多 都是we we are our
Dear sirs:
We got your informations from XXX, knowing that you are business in dyes.
This is XXX from XXX import & export co., ltd. suppling dyestuff to more than 20 countries with good quality and very competitive price.
If you are in the market for it, be free to ask for a quotation.
Look forward to your reply and wish you he a nice day.
Best regards
XXX[收起]