各位大神帮帮忙，我这里有什么问题，没回复啊，新人求指教

wang42
Dear sirs: We got your informations from XXX, from that we know you are business in dyes. We are XXX import & export??co., ltd. we are suppling dyestuff??to more than 20 countries. We are the most professional dyes and pigments. Our products range from acid dyes, basic dyes, direct dyes, sulphur dyes. with good quality and very competitive price. We like to establish business relations with you and your company. If you are interested in our products, don't hesitate??contact us or you can visit our website get more informations. Look forward to your reply and wish you he a nice day. Best regards XXX
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2013-06-25 1151阅读
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  • Syed.Reazul.Karim2
    谢谢啊
    2013-06-26
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  • winnyzhou
    语句 用词都没什么太大问题

    只是陈述过于累赘  第一人称用的太多 都是we we are  our


    Dear sirs:
    We got your informations from XXX, knowing that you are business in dyes.

    This is XXX from  XXX import & export  co., ltd. suppling dyestuff  to more than 20 countries with good quality and very competitive price.

    If you are in the market for it, be free to ask for a quotation.

    Look forward to your reply and wish you he a nice day.

    Best regards
    XXX
    2013-06-26
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