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看到想自杀。我的英语够差了还能看出来你的问题。
As a professional manufacturer with paper packaging .好像whit在这里用的是不对的。
调转一下变成As a professional paper packaging manufacturer应该会还好点,或是直接 As a professional paper packaging .
we good at ,别那么节省,be good at固定搭配。
do not hesitate to contact me 不要犹豫与我吗? please contact me immediately ,这个可能更通顺简单。
FREE SAMPLES will be sent for your evaluation 这句似乎也不行。样品发送给你的评价?[收起]
If somebody send me email with all words in capital or red, i will think whether i he taken mistake with him/her. If i cann't find it by myself, i will ask the sender.
As usual, nobody alway do it. This is the basic social convention.[收起]