楼上翻译的差不多,但是看完感觉客户会有个疑问:工厂忙跟付订金有直接关系吗?楼主是想催订单,个人觉得生产忙这句完全可以去掉,直接说,we could only start production after 30% deposit received. The lead time is 10 working days. Pls confirm and arrange deposit at the soonest.
Production would be delayed to later February if we could not receive deposit before the end of January.
Pls send the final design to us before 25th. Thanks.
最好给客户排一个时间表,这样比较明确,最怕的是客户对时间没概念,一直拖,到最后单子落不下来,毕竟不是自己的母语,沟通起来还是尽量明确一点,免得耽误事情。[收起]