请高人指点下英文简历

朱亦凝
请高人帮我指点下英文简历，谢谢 Self-assessmentcan can deal with place order、follow up order、goods inspection、documents、follow up payment、complaint by myself. in addition, can maintain a good relation of cooperation with customer、supplier and forwarder. Work Experience2011/04 -- Now XX Rubber Manufacturing Limited | | Documentation Specialist and merchandiser Trading/Import or Export | Private | Company Size：Less than 20 | Salary(before tax):confidential Job Description: company'business focus on rubber seal(custom all kinds of rubber seal according to customer's drawing and request) . i am responsible for deal with quotation、make sample、place order、follow up order、booking、document till after shipment . follow up payment should be received and paied. 2006/06 -- 2011/04 Hangzhou XX Trade Co., Ltd | | Documentation Specialist and merchandiser Trading/Import or Export | Private | Company Size：Less than 20 | Salary(before tax):confidential Job Description: company'business focus on hardware(lock、tape) . i am responsible for deal with place order、follow up order、booking、document、 follow up payment . collect documents for tax refund. meanwhile i was in touch with L/C(india and bangladesh), include check L/C、provide a set of documents to negatiation bank. 2003/09 -- 2006/05 Hangzhou XX Trade Co., Ltd | | Foreign Trade Specialist/Assistant Trading/Import or Export | Private | Company Size：Less than 20 | Salary(before tax):confidential Job Description: company'business focus onsmall articles of daily use(mat、storage box) . i am responsible for deal with goods inspection, check B/L, make invoice and packing list, Education Background1999/07-- 2003/07 Fujian Agriculture and Forestry University | bee science | Bachelor Graduates Info. Social Events Training Certificates2008/05 Assistant Accountant note: 2001/06 Nationwide Computer Level Test Band 2 note: 2002/06 CET4 note: Language SkillsEnglish ：reading&writing erage | listening&speaking??basic
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2013-09-02 358阅读
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Overall, this is a good start for an English resume. Here are some suggestions to improve it further:

1. Use proper capitalization and punctuation. Make sure the first letter of each sentence and each proper noun is capitalized, and that you use periods at the end of each sentence.

2. Be consistent in formatting. For example, make sure all job titles are formatted the same way (e.g. "Documentation Specialist and Merchandiser" vs. "Foreign Trade Specialist/Assistant").

3. Provide more details about your job responsibilities and achievements. For example, instead of just saying you "deal with quotation", provide more details about how you prepare and negotiate quotes, and any achievements you have related to this task.

4. Use bullet points to make your resume easier to read. Instead of writing paragraphs, use bullet points to highlight your main responsibilities and achievements for each job.

5. Include any relevant education, training, or certifications. This will help show that you have the necessary skills and knowledge for the job you are applying for.

6. Improve your language skills section. List your English proficiency as either "basic", "intermediate", or "advanced", and provide specific examples of how you have used English in your work (e.g. "communicated with English-speaking clients" or "prepared reports in English").

Overall, remember to tailor your resume to the specific job you are applying for, and highlight your most relevant skills and experiences. Good luck!
2023-06-26
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  • coco7
    里面好多、 显得不专业，英语中没有顿号，还是用逗号吧
    2013-09-19
  • Emily15
    工作职责最好分 1.2 3.4 分别罗列。。这样看起来很清晰。。
    2013-09-03
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