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As I know you are a leading manufacturer of quality team uniforms based in Markham,Ontario,个人感觉,最好不要用第一人称,尽量用第二人称,感觉要正规些。and have interested in purchasing *** from China mainland.We ***** Co.,Ltd is a profeional ***** manufacturer for years,什么公司应该是放在最前面,covering 50-100gsm paper,width can be longest 2.4m. Hope to establish relationship with you! Should you want to know more about our company,please visit our website as below,这句话可以不要,言简意赅,言简意赅,最重要,3秒钟停留的时间,网站建议放在最后,公司名称, 电话,传真,地址,联系人,邮箱,SKYPE,都要写上,反正放到最后!最后再说一句没有人回复,是正常事,不是方法的问题,是时间的问题,加油努力吧!
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