SOS！外贸新手&外贸新部门，求指正。谢谢

背景：本人外贸新手，进的公司也是刚成立外贸部，让写个公司介绍去阿里巴巴账号，怕有重大疏漏，先附下自己写的，求大神指正，感激！ Company Introduction: ********* is founded in 1999 and a high-tech enterprise integrating R&D, production and sales. We produce professional equipments including: face recognition time attendance, fingerprint time attendance, electronic punch in clock and paper shredder, etc. Our company has a strong technical force: it owns a manufactory which covers nearly 20,000 square meter and well-equipped departments. We he more than ten years' experience in producing paper shredder, many of our techniques he won patents. Besides, our company has a wide sales network: it has built many branches and own 10% market share. Our "****" paper shredder has sold to many countries in Europe, America, Asia and Africa, which won high prize from clients. Our company believes that best quality, best sincerity, best development and best service will come to more cooperation and support. For the mutual benefit, please contract with us at any time if you want to know more information or come to deals, we will try our best to get you a good result! Address:************* Tel: *********** Fax:************ Website: *************

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Company Introduction:
********* is a high-tech enterprise that was founded in 1999. We specialize in the research and development, production, and sales of professional equipment including face recognition time attendance systems, fingerprint time attendance systems, electronic punch in clocks, and paper shredders, among others.

Our company boasts a strong technical force and operates a well-equipped manufacturing facility that covers nearly 20,000 square meters. With over ten years of experience in producing paper shredders, many of our techniques have been awarded patents.

In addition, we have established a wide sales network with multiple branches, capturing 10% of the market share. Our "****" paper shredder has been well-received in Europe, America, Asia, and Africa, earning high praise from our clients.

At *********, we firmly believe in providing the best quality, sincerity, development, and service. We strive for more cooperation and support, working towards mutual benefit. Please feel free to contact us at any time for further information or to discuss potential business opportunities. We are committed to delivering the best results possible.

Address: *************
Tel: ***********
Fax: ************
Website: *************

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SANDY.JIANG

good job
2013-07-03
Elva3

以下是在你翻译的基础上的一些修改，我的水平有限，仅供参考吧，算是我的歉意，我之前的话真的没有别的意思，

Company introduction：

Established in 1999, XXXX is a high-tech enterprise integrating R&D, production and sales. it is mainly engaged in producing professional equipments, including: face recognition time attendance, fingerprint time attendance, electronic punch in clock and paper shredder, etc. Our company owns strong technical force and well-equipped departments, the manufactory covers nearly 20,000 square meters and has more than
2013-07-02
lizhan

我没别的意思呵呵就是有些地方语法不大通顺，我以为GOOGLE翻译的呢，有的句子没有动词，上下连接不上，我其实也不专业，要不就帮你改了，别介意哈
2013-07-02
Betty5

哎，自己又检查了一遍，确实有不少错误，但是不是google翻译的，谢谢你！
2013-07-01
ryan.shieh

还可以吧！
2013-07-01
Mark.Schelluch

这是我自己写的，有这么烂吗
2013-06-30
SANDY.JIANG

亲，你这应该是Google直接翻译的，问题不少，最好是找个专业的人来帮你翻译吧
2013-06-30
amanda.marie

为啥没人来说句话啊，急哦
2013-06-30

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