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Dear Purchase Manager,

Glad to hear that you're on the market for Coaxial Cables and
Wires of Cameras, HD, Video, mobile solution
and so on.

We know that *** and *** offer Cables and Wire to you, as a leading global
manufacturer,

I think maybe you can also account on us for below advantages:

First：Our products can meet your requirements. eg: Multimedia
Application Series, Coaxial Cable series, Communication equipment series,
Halogen-Free m PPE series…

Second：Specialize in this field for 34 years with mature technique and
reasonable price:

*** 1st cable manufacturer in the world to be awarded UL ROHS Green Mark.

***Sony
Green partner. Be well known by Belden’s subsidiary; Meet Belden certification standards;

***Halogen-free,
Green Commitment, miniaturization

***Products
conform to UL/CCC/E/F/Z-MARK certificate.

***Partners: HP, Epson, Sony, Nintendo, Samsung, HuaWei;

Do you
have interest to our company？if so, I would like to offer product
catalogue to you.

Pls
advise, thanks. Any question pls do not hesitate to contact me

Tks & br
Cindy

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2015-10-20 725阅读

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AI回答：

Dear Cindy,

Thank you for reaching out to me regarding your company's coaxial cables and wires for cameras, HD, video, and mobile solutions. I appreciate your interest in offering your products to our company.

However, I would like to provide some feedback on your email. Firstly, I suggest adding more details about your company and its background to give me a better understanding of your company's capabilities and experience in this field.

Secondly, while it's good to highlight your products' advantages, I suggest focusing more on how your products can meet our specific needs and requirements. Please provide more detailed information about how your products are suitable for our company's needs.

Lastly, including testimonials or references from other clients or customers can help build trust and reputation for your company.

Thank you again for your interest, and I look forward to hearing back from you with further details about your products and services.

Best regards,
[Your Name]

2023-05-21

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