语句简洁是你的优点,但是语气比较生硬,应该注意多使用礼貌词语:Dear XX,Good day! Regarding the quotation of XX sent to you on DATE, can you pls kindly tell us your comments? or do you have a target price? we will try to offer you the best price in this project. Thank you!
好好加油!对于新人,最好工作稳定,这样成长更快,别轻易放弃。[收起]