这个句子为什么这样改？

deciding to rescind the earlier estimate, our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.” 应改为 deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we he updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment. 为什么？

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2013-06-21 1158阅读

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Liz3

Deciding to rescind the earlier estimate, our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.” ---这个完全错误，因为主句和从句的主语不一致，那么就不能用ing形式。这样的话，你只能使用两个独立的句子表达这个意思。 Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we he updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment.--而这个句子的主句和从句的主语都是“we”一致。故可以使用单词ing形式。
2013-06-24
cindy36

原句明显chinenglish了。并且没主语了。我是这样认为的不知对不对。
2013-06-23