20年外贸老人修改的开发信--5
luoke
修改:
DearXXX,
Goodmorning!
Iamverygladtoknowyoufromyourprofessionalwebsite,youaretheleadingcompanyinJapanformachinevisionsystem.Ialsonoticethatyoupaymuchattentiontoloweryourcostforqualitymachinevisionsystem.ThatiswhereIcanbeofhelp.
MayIintroducemyselftoyou?IamXXX,fromXXXX.WehavebeeninmachinevisionsystemindustryformorethanXXXyears.Iamconfidentthatwearecapabletomeetyourqualitystandard,whilecuttingyourcostbyatleast10%.Pleasebesure,wearealsoverycapabletocustomproducewithyourdrawings.
Toenableyoutoevaluateourquality,mayIinviteyoutovisitourfactory?(或者:mayIsendyouasample?)
Bestregards,
XXXX
由于情况不一样,不一定就合用。贴这个例子,是希望新人通过对实际案例的运用,了解开发信如何写。光看理论似乎还有点迷糊。