Regarding the return: I can offer you a $10 discount, which you can keep. Alternatively, you can return it to me via USPS, and the associated costs will be deducted from your order. What are your thoughts?
Regarding BW:
I can offer you a USD10 discount,but it will keep on your side.
perhaps,you can send it back to me by USPS,but the cost get charged to your order.
please advice which one you prefer!!
As for BW, 2 choices for you as below:
1. Keep it and 10 USD discount will be for you.
2. Send it back by UPS and the cost incurred will be deducted from your order.
Please advise which one you prefer.
不知我这么写对不对?
About BW:
I can give you $ 10 discount will be retained at your office or you can be returned to me via USPS, the costs incurred can be deducted in your order.
I want to give a discount to ten dollar for this goods and keep it on your side.
if not, you can send back to me via UPS express,and any charge caused pls claim back to us in your orders. Pls advise your idea.