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高吸水性树脂（super absorbent polymer,简称sap）是本公司运用具有自主知识产权的发明专利而研发生产的一种新型的功能性高分子吸水材料. sap is a kind of new functional macromolecular abssorbent material, which is r & d and produced by our independent intellectual property rights of invention patent. 含有大量的亲水基团和独特的体型网状结构，能够在短时间内吸并保持超过自身重量数百倍的水分或者数十倍的生理盐水（体液），保水性能良好，它以优异的吸水保持性能，在医疗卫生用品领域得以广泛的应用。随着现代社会的飞速发展，其应用范围正在不断地拓展到更为广阔的领域。 as sap owns a large number of hydrophilic groups and the unique type of network structure, sap can absorb water up to several hundred times its weight or several dozen times of physiological saline (or body fluids) in a short time.moreover, sap is widely used in the field of medical and hygiene supplies by the excellent water retention properties.with the rapid development of modern society, sap will be widely used in a wider fieled. 高吸水性树脂是一种交联型丙烯酸acrylic acid c3h4o2/丙烯酸钠sodium acrylate共聚物，外观呈白色颗粒状粉末，采用先进的专利生产技术，产品凝胶强度高、抗压吸量大，单体残留量低，无毒无臭，对皮肤无刺激，在一定条件下可以完全降解成水、二氧化碳等小分子物质，是一种真正的“绿色”环保的高科技化工产品。 xumex sap is a kind of cross linked copolymer of acrylic acid (c3h4o2) and sodium acrylates which looks like a kind of white granular powder.under the advanced patent technology, xumex sap has the advantages of high gel strength, high compressive, high absorption, low residual, non-toxic, odorless and no stimulation to skin. what is more, under certain conditions, xumex sap can be completely degraded into water, carbon dioxide and other small molecules which is really a kind of environmental protection high-tech chemical products. 二、specifications and other main performance index. item? ? ? ? appearance? ? ? ? free absorbency for physiological saline (g/g within 60 ms)? ? ? ? free absorbency for distilled water(g/g within 60 ms)? ? ? ? free absorbency for running water(g/g within 60 ms)? ? ? ? absorbing rate(80 g of running water)? ? ? ? ph value references? ? ? ? white granules? ? ? ? ≥53? ? ? ? ≥520? ? ? ? ≥300? ? ? ? ≤60? ? ? ? 6.5-8.0 3.widely used in: 1.baby or adult paper diaper； 2.sanitary napkin or sanitary pad； 3.composite paper； 4.mattress used in operation； 5.pets mattress; 6. high polymer foot bath and so on. 4. using method 1、recommendate dosages：diaper （6～15g/pcs）sanitary napkin（3～6g/pcs）composite paper（30～80g/m2） 2、the dosages above are for reference only,pls use it according to your needs.
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The translated version looks good overall, but here are a few suggestions for improvement:

1. Instead of "new functional macromolecular abssorbent material," you can say "a new functional macromolecular absorbent material."

2. Instead of "is r & d and produced by," you can say "is researched, developed, and produced by."

3. Instead of "moreover," you can use "Furthermore" or "In addition."

4. Instead of "will be widely used," you can use "is being widely used" or "has been widely used."

Here's the revised version:

"SAP is a kind of new functional macromolecular absorbent material, which is researched, developed, and produced by our independent intellectual property rights of invention patent. SAP owns a large number of hydrophilic groups and a unique type of network structure, which enables it to absorb water up to several hundred times its weight or several dozen times of physiological saline (or body fluids) in a short time. Moreover, SAP is widely used in the field of medical and hygiene supplies due to its excellent water retention properties. With the rapid development of modern society, SAP is being widely used in a wider field."

"Xumex SAP is a kind of cross-linked copolymer of acrylic acid (C3H4O2) and sodium acrylates, which looks like white granular powder. Under the advanced patent technology, Xumex SAP has the advantages of high gel strength, high compressive strength, high absorption rate, low residual, non-toxic, odorless, and no skin stimulation. What's more, under certain conditions, Xumex SAP can be completely degraded into water, carbon dioxide, and other small molecules, making it a truly 'green' environmentally friendly high-tech chemical product."

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    高吸水性树脂（Super Absorbent Polymer,简称SAP）是本公司运用具有自主知识产权的发明专利而研发生产的一种新型的功能性高分子吸水材料.
    SAP,a kind of new functional macromolecular abssorbent material, which is R & D and produced with our independent intellectual property rights of invention patent.
    含有大量的亲水基团和独特的体型网状结构，能够在短时间内吸并保持超过自身重量数百倍的水分或者数十倍的生理盐水（体液），保水性能良好，它以优异的吸水保持性能，在医疗卫生用品领域得以广泛的应用。随着现代社会的飞速发展，其应用范围正在不断地拓展到更为广阔的领域。
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