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Ashton.Henry
我们老板觉得非常混乱,决定暂停一切。 our boss feel very confusion??and decided toSuspended all contact。
2013-10-18 333阅读
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以下是我改写后的句子:

Our boss feels very confused and has decided to temporarily suspend all business operations.

主要修改了三个地方:

1. feel confusion 改为 feels confused,因为 confusion 是名词,而 feel 必须接形容词。同时,加上了-s,因为主语 boss 是第三人称单数。
2. 暂停一切 可以更准确的表达为 temporarily suspend all business operations,暂停一切有点含糊,可能不够明确。
3. 加上了 temporarily,因为是暂停,不一定代表永久性的停止,而 temporarily 表示临时性的,更准确。
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